The Haunted House
By: Izabella Maestroiani
“ Knock Knock.” It’s probably Ava. I’ll get the door. “Hi Izabella are you ready to go trick or treating?” said Ava. “Yes, do you want to trick or treat in my neighborhood” I said. “ Sure, what exactly is your costume?’’ said Ava. “ I am Michael Jackson, what are you?” I said. Ava said “ I am Albert Einstein.” I said “ Ok, lets just go.” “Ok” Ava said.
After two hours of trick or treating we stopped at the Ol’ SaraLogan’s house. “Hey, there’s Ol’ Sara Logan’s house, let’s knock on the door.” I said. Ava said “No, she is really scary!” I said. “Let’s just knock on the door this year.” “Fine, but just this year.” Ava said.
We knocked on Ol’ Sara Logan’s house. “Yes….” Ol’ Sara Logan said. Ava and I said “ Trick or treat!” Then she grabbed a bag from behind her and stuck us in the bag. Then, she took us to her basement and tied us up to a metal pole. Ava said “ What are we going to do now?” “ Let’s try to cut the rope off with this knife I found.” I said. “Okay try.” Ava said. I spent fifteen minutes trying to cut the rope off. Finally, the rope came off. Then, we tried to runaway, but Ava stepped on a stick. When she stepped on the stick we decided to hide.
After, thirty minutes of hiding Ol’ Sara Logan found us, and took us to her trunk in her car. “What are we going to do now?” said Ava. “Let’s try kicking.” I said. Ava said “Ok,” so we started to kick and this small green piece of hello popped out of nowhere. Then I put the jello in my pocket, and we started to kick again. “Hey, the tunk opened!” said Ava. When the trunk opened we ran out of the trunk, and Ava said “Throw the jello at her!” So, I threw the jello at her and she got stuck in it, and the jello grew until it was nineteen feet wide. We knew she was trapped forever.
After we threw the jello at her we decided to runaway. We ran so far away we landed on the red carpet. “How did we land here?” Ava said. “I don’t know, let’s just party.” I said. Then we did, and we lived happily ever after on the red carpet.
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Hi, my name is Moses i’m from Lancaster, PA. I liked how you used dialogue. I wish you could use different words for (said). I wonder why Ava had jello in her pocket? you can visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/burkholdz1q
Hi, My name is Moses from Lancaster PA. I really like your Scary story it gives me the creeps. I wished you could of told me who Ol’ Sara Logan was. I wonder was the Red carpet big or small?
Ol’ Sara Logan was supposed to be a wizard. The red carpet was big. By the way I will visit your blog.